Redwood Writers Author Support and Craft Support Groups had our inaugural gathering today before the General Membership Meeting.
The Author Support concentrated on getting to know each other and deciding how the members could best support each other. Each person decided on a goal for next meeting and how to achieve it. Future topics could include: How/when do you write? What tricks have you learned to help carve out time to write? What do you do with ideas you don’t yet have time to write about?
Craft Support used a prompt to generate discussion: How do you organize your story? Do you outline? Each of the half dozen participants had a different answer. Some used outlines while others didn’t but everyone gained a different perspective on how to put together their story. A discussion began on plotting but alas, we ran out of time. Next prompts will include: characters, dialog, and developing resources.
Both groups were moderated by a member who kept participants on track (not an easy task for writers!). Leaders will vary each meeting as will those who attend. All members of Redwood Writers are encouraged to take advantage of these unique Writers Support gatherings. They are free and are held from 1pm-2:15 pm on the day of the monthly General Membership meeting in the Empire Room at the Flamingo Hotel.
I am still gathering names for critique groups. The plan is to offer the same venue and time slot to people who want to meet. In the next 3 weeks, I should have enough information to decide whether we can go forward with the critique groups at this time. I’ve also been considering who best to work in a technology discussion—maybe a panel, but that will have to wait for another day.
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Guess I Better Start a File
Blog post January 26, 2012
Today in the mail, I received another rejection notice. It wasn’t too hard to throw up my defenses and pretend that I wasn’t disappointed. After all, I’m getting pretty good at this rejection business. This is the second one in two weeks. The editor at HarperCollins passed on my manuscript but said she felt my protagonist was strong. The second was an agent at Maria Carvainis Agency in NYC. While also bad news, this agent said she “found the premise compelling and the characters interesting.” She added, “I felt the dialogue had a tendency to feel stilted, and some of the narrative (particularly internal monologues/thoughts) was a little cliché.”
Finally, something to work with! Although I disagree about the dialog (I think that’s one of my strong points), I know I can use help in the internal monolog/thoughts area. Because I know that I don’t know everything, I’m going to look at the dialog again, as well. Also, as my husband pointed out, these critiques indicate she read the entire 100 pages I sent. That tells me that she was interested enough to get through that much—she didn’t dump it in the recycle bin after the first page.
So, I’m on the right track. Just need to keep at it. This week, I sent off my entire manuscript to the Public Safety Writers’ Association (of which I am a member) for a summary edit. I’m looking forward to their suggestions.
I started the sequel to Probable Cause last week, and so far, I think I like this story even better.
Still have two queries outstanding but time to send out more.
My husband, Danny and I came up with a reasonable schedule so I can dedicate quality time to my stories. In the past few days, I’ve racked up over 2000 words. Very promising! It’s a blessing to have a supportive husband!
Inspiration is in the air!
Blog post Jan. 9th, 2012
What an incredible group of people! Redwood Writers members have done it again!
Months ago, President Linda Loveland Reid had an idea to start genre groups before the Redwood Writers General Meeting. Over the holidays, we exchanged a few emails, came up with some thoughts and decided to meet with any interested parties on January 8th before the General Meeting.
The meeting time rolled around and two people showed up. Holy moly, I thought. This is going nowhere fast. Within the next 5-10 minutes we had a dozen people! Okay, so writers aren’t known for punctuality.
We started with a round-table on what each member wanted from the group. With some variations, the resounding answer was—craft support—as in “conversations”. We discussed meetings for techniques to enhance our writing as well as platform building and generally everyone agreed they could use help with this, too. However, the idea of small groups to meet, talk over ideas that pertain to the writing life, offer support and resources was the winner!
So here’s what I’m thinking: twelve people is too many for a discussion group so we’ll split into two. We’ll meet in the Empire Room at the Flamingo on February 12th at 1 pm. I want to designate a moderator for each group-someone who will keep the discussion moving forward and an eye on the time. This will be voluntary but I’d like to rotate the position.
The rules will be simple:
o Disagree kindly
o Wait your turn to speak
o Observe time constraints
Some seriously GOOD suggestions were offered and I want to memorialize them so we can come back to them as time allows (or dictates) later.
o Meeting more often than once a month-off site, probably during the day but flexible
o Topic/education focused groups-technology/platform building is a big issue that many would like more training in
o Critique groups-both genre-specific and general. I would only act as a facilitator to get people together. Group members need to decide their own terms. Please email me at thonieh@sbcglobal.net if you are interested in finding a group.
o Resources-I will be taking this on. Our group is so talented that we should be able to find help for whatever ails the writer in need. Bear in mind, many of our members make their living at technology, social media, editing, etc. Discuss fees before making commitments with them so both of you know what to expect
o Mentoring wasn’t mentioned but I thought we could look at this for writers who have specific issues, for example: a member who doesn’t finish anything she starts. It wouldn’t take too much effort to call, email, or facebook her to keep her on a pre-determined track
I’ll be emailing a copy of this to Redwood Writers members. I want everyone to see the fruits of our labors. Someone might see something here that intrigues them. We can always take more members! Our muses are busy but sometimes they need a little nudge in the right direction. So stand-by for truly dynamic members who want to share and motivate each other!
Inspiration is in the air!
New Years’ Goals-
Well, Christmas has come and gone. New Years is but a memory. It’s time to start the year with fresh goals for the next 12 months. Generally, I have two writerly objectives: get an agent/get published and second, outline and research the next book in my series that began with PROBABLE CAUSE.
That said, I have two humble irons in the fire at this writing. First, is interest from the Maria Caravainis Agency to look over 100 pages of my story. Second is a HarperCollins publisher requested to look at my manuscript. It should be on the editor’s desk when she returns from Christmas vacation on January 3rd. The literary agency was also on a break but should have my 100 pages upon their return also on January 3rd.
Yeah, yeah, yeah—heard all that before.
What’s new—NOW?
Good question. I’m busy lining up my next agent queries. If HarperCollins isn’t interested, I’ll focus on finding an agent. He or she can search for the right publisher, negotiate the right deal and generally look out for my virginal (literary, that is) interests.
In the mean time, I’m drafting the story into a plot. I’m using Martha Alderson’s website and videos as well as William Nobel’s book, Conflict, Action & Suspense.
Research will be fun, interesting and a challenge all rolled into one. My settings will be a sailboat, Mexico – haven’t determined where but it will be where drug cartels are active as that is a pivotal point in my story.
Another project I’m working on involves the Redwood Writers Club. I belong to this chapter of the California Writers Club and have been lassoed (okay, I volunteered) into putting together what we’re calling “Genre Meets” for lack of a more specific title. Here’s how it works: our first meeting will be a brainstorming session to define our individual and collective goals. We’re looking at forming critique groups, learning more about different types of publishing , landing an agent, building a platform, technology (it doesn’t have to defeat writers!) and many other pertinent topics. We will be getting together before the monthly General Membership meeting. I will announce the topic for the next group meeting weeks before usually on the club listserve. If you are interested in attending and are not a member, email me at pigtales@sbcglobal.net.
After our session, I’ll blog more about the results and how we can all benefit from this meeting.
Some interesing stuff
Last week, I had some interest from a NY publisher. This week, a blind query letter yielded a request for more! I queried Maria Caravainis Agency because she is the agent for two of my favorite authors: Sandra Brown and P.J. Parrish. In a speedy reply, Literary Associate Elizabeth Copps requested 100 pages of my story. I just finished a professional-looking cover letter, title page and 100 pages printed as cleanly as possible. No smudges, no crumpled edges, address label looks great. I’m doing everything I can to present myself as business-like as possible. The envelope should arrive well before her return to the office after the holiday break. I stopped short of sending reference letters from employers/editors with which I have worked. That just seemed a bit too needy.
Wish me luck!
Read two of my short pieces
Yay! Read two of my flash fiction pieces on Pat Tyler’s Quick Start Writing blog: http://quickstartwriting.wordpress.com OR http://quickstartwriting.wordpress.com/?s=Thonie
I wrote these during her classes I took in 2009. Pat truly jump started my writing and introduced me to Redwood Writers Club. Changed my life!
North Valley Times-April 2011
Tips on Disaster Preparedness
By Thonie Hevron
442 words
General advice on preparing your family and your community for natural and man-made disasters
In light of the disaster in Japan, we could all use a refresher on what to do BEFORE a catastrophic event occurs. As we are also vulnerable to earthquakes and to a lesser degree, tsunamis, a little planning and some follow-through can mean the difference between making it or not-not only for you, but other members of your family.
- Develop a communications plan for your family. Choose someone who does not live with you (preferably an out-of-town relative or friend) with whom you and other family members can contact to check on each other in the event that you are separated during a disaster. Carry that person’s contact information in your purse or wallet.
- Make sure children know their last name, phone number, address, and number for the out-of-town contact person.
- If evacuating from your home designate a meeting place outside so everyone can be accounted for.
- Make sure every member of your family knows an alternate route home.
- If family members can’t get home, designate a meeting place.
- Learn how to shut off utilities such as gas, electricity, and water.
- Assemble an emergency preparedness kit that will allow your family to camp out for three days. Assume you’ll be without electricity and running water. Don’t forget your pets.
- Store your emergency supplies in sealed containers such as plastic tubs – taped shut.
- Keep cash on hand; automated teller machines won’t be working if the power is out.
- Learn CPR and first aid to help with medical emergencies.
- Learn about emergency plans for your children’s school or daycare center.
- If you’re a teen, find out whether your school has a group of student volunteers to help out in emergency situations. If not, offer to help start such a group. Or start a School Crime Watch.
- Learn about your company’s emergency plan. Practice the plan. Learn exit routes.
These and other valuable tips can be found at the non-profit National Crime Prevention Council: www.ncpc.org
Check out upcoming RPDPS events–
April 18, 2011 – Monday – Tip A Cop – Applebee’s – Rohnert Park – 5:30pm – 9pm – Cotati and CHP will join us again this year. One of the most entertaining fundraisers for Special Olympics you’ll ever find!
May 14, 2011 – Saturday – 3rd Annual “Running with the Pack” 5k/10k fun walk/run All proceeds benefit the Special Olympics. Approximate time 7:30 am – 11:30 am. We are adding a 10k run through SSU.
More info to follow in upcoming editions!
A new chapter
As a retired annuitant (commonly referred to as rats), I work a minimum of 10 hours a week for Rohnert Park Department of Public Safety. The bulk of my off time is spent polishing my recently completed suspense novel, PROBABLE CAUSE, traveling with my husband, riding my horse and gardening.
This weekend, I will attend the San Francisco Writers’ Conference. I look forward to sharing air with such authors as Robert Dugoni and David Morrell. My search for a literary agent will commence with the same gusto with which I worked on my novel.
Check back for my progress.
Hammett Archives Cough Up a Thriller
By Kevin Fagan Chronicle Staff Writer
Adapted by Thonie Hevron
Fans of the hard-boiled detective novel are giddy with the news that
a national mystery magazine is about to publish a long-lost story by the father of the genre-Dashiell Hammett—fifty years after his death.
The story, “So I Shot Him,” is one of about a dozen of the San Francisco writer’s pieces that were never printed anywhere. Word is that this 12-page thriller is high-quality and complete.
Andrew Gulli, managing editor of the Strand Magazine, stumbled across the piece while poking through Hammett’s papers at the University of Texas at Austin. He’s featuring it in his Feb. 28 issue. “It was incredible to find this,” Gulli said by phone from his office in Birmingham, Michigan. “I found 11 to 14 stories not published, and they’re all pretty good — but this one just struck me as vintage Hammett. There was just something fantastic about it.”
It’s a secret
Nobody’s tipping his hand about the story line. That’s a mystery that will have to be solved by buying the magazine. But Gulli and others who have read the story say it reads like a finished draft in the author’s signature clipped, punch-to-the- gut prose.
“It has elements of fear and Hammett’s cynicism in it,” Gulli said. “What Hammett was very good at was a constant ratcheting up of tension to the great Hammett ending, and that really stuck out to me about this story.”
The odd thing about the newly unearthed story is that it has no date or title, unlike most of Hammett’s other manuscripts. The title to be used in Strand is simply the first line: “So I shot him.”
The black bird
Hammett died of lung cancer Jan. 10, 1961, at the age of 66. By then he had published more than 80 short stories and five novels, mostly about fedora-wearing tough guys who cracked tough cases.
The most famous of his works was 1930’s “The Maltese Falcon,” considered the first novel in the cynical detective. Hammett also wrote “The Thin Man.” Both novels were turned into Hollywood movie hits.
The author’s longtime paramour, playwright Lillian Hellman, had his papers stored alongside hers after his death. That’s why they are in Texas instead of San Francisco, where Hammett’s writing and career were centered.
Not a first draft
San Francisco publisher Vince Emery read “So I Shot Him” in 2003 when he was compiling his book “Lost Stories,” a collection of 21 out of print Hammett pieces that Emery then printed two years later. “Almost everything Hammett wrote appeared in a magazine at some point, but this was never printed anywhere,” Emery said. “There are
other bits that he never printed, and most of it is very rough, little chunks and unfinished, but this one is polished. It doesn’t read like a first draft. “There is a crime in it, but it’s not really a mystery story. It’s about fear. I’m sure Hammett fans will love it.”
They already do, even without having read it.
Getting one’s hands on an unpublished fragment of anything by Hammett is no easy feat. Rights to the Texas collection are controlled by his heirs, and Hammett granddaughter and spokeswoman Julie Rivett said they are choosy.
‘A finite resource’
“This story was kind of an inside secret, I suppose,” said Rivett, “There is a small selection of unpublished work, and while we know they are there, we are careful about how we use them,” Rivett said. “They’re kind of a finite resource. “We’re really excited that the public is getting to see this story now, though. I haven’t even read it myself yet.”
E-mail Kevin Fagan at kfagan@sfchronicle.com.
Copyright © 2011 San Francisco Chronicle 01/21/2011
Thrillerz Critique Group
Susan Littlefield, Billie Settles and I are readying our welcome mats for two new members to our group. At last night’s meeting, we voted to let Andy and William (or is it George?–stay tuned) join the thrilling fun. I got spanked at group last night. That tends to happen when an author hustles through a scene and submits it to the group–without editing it first. yikes. Enough laziness. I vow to READ ALOUD all scenes for submission.
That should help, shouldn’t it?